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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I'm kind of on this romantic poetry kick at the moment, bare w/ me!! Every time we say goodbye It's killing me slowly deep inside I'm a man in love One step from a ticket to Heaven You only live once Once is not enough with you So with the time I have I want the chance to make you happy A romantic heart A porch swing on a summer night Skin so soft and smooth I shudder from a touch so slight I'm attracted to paradise You've got me flying high Girl it would be so nice To say goodnight instead of goodbye Tell me that you love me Tell me you don't want me to go away Tell me that you need me Tell me you want me to stay Just tell me.... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostBoy - Your 'romantic' nature is A-Okay in my book ! Keep it coming. I like ... and the 'porch swing' really was charming. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey...this heart can always handle romance. I like the romantic ones...shhh...don't tell anyone though  |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Marge, you're A-OK, period! hoot, no problem, we'll just keep it between us! |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Lostboy-as you already know, I too am a fan of your romantic heart. Can't you tell I find ya wherever you go on here. So actually you aren't such a lostboy are ya?  Nevermind , just in a goofy mood today, you'll have to excuse me.  So back to the point, this is yet another great poem. And I'll bear with your romantic kicks anytime. just keep 'em comein'.[This message has been edited by danni (edited 12-12-1999).] |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Once was lost but now am found danni? You're a doll, no need excusing goofy moods, I love it!! |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
nice & romantic but not insipid, lostboy. I thought your poem sounded like it would also be good as a song... ever thought about that? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nothing wrong with romantic poems in my book! Very nice, lostboy! Denise |
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Eboni Junior Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 17Texas |
I have only read two of your poems but your words inspire me. (Few people know that I am a hopeless romantic SHHH!)So keep the romance coming. Eboni Banks |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I am Lost in your poetry........ Your heart I can see, Your soul I can feel, A ROMANTIC HEARTwas mentioned in verse three, I relate to thee, In a poem you shall find the answer to the question you have asked..... You are so sweet and Romantic! I love your work and I can't wait till your next post! |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Lostboy, Great romantic poem. I especially love the line.... To say Goodnight instead of goodbye.  |
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