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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-12 11:18 AM


I die for you,
I live for you,my love,Noone can stop me,
Even they use their power on me,
No my love,
I won't let you down ,
No,I won't let the world stop me,
If they try to stop me,
I'll die for you,
I 'll do anything for you,
You're my life,only my life,
That leads me goals to achieve when you give me srtenght to stand on my own,


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lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 1999-12-12 11:34 AM


That's very strong love vandana. Always be in control of "it", not "it" of you. Nice work.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-12-12 02:59 PM


A love so strong that one would die for...no one could ever ask for more
First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

3 posted 1999-12-12 10:03 PM


No greater gift can one give another than his or her life.  very strong this one  

 Share what you are for you are what you share


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