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Beri
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since 1999-11-25
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0 posted 1999-12-05 08:29 PM


I guess I should have known better
Than to let myself fall prey to these ways.
I guess I should have thought more
Of all the consequences before engaging in the acts.
I guess I should have given up rationalizing our actions
And just have known what was right and what was wrong.
I guess I could have controlled myself...
But then again, what fun could that be?

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Nan
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1 posted 1999-12-05 08:44 PM


If ya can't have some fun.... Why bother???
Rachel_A
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since 1999-11-30
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North Webster, IN USA
2 posted 1999-12-05 10:03 PM


Wow.  This poem gave me chills, literally.  This poem is my thoughts exactly.  I'm serious.  This poem touched my heart, my soul, my everything.  It was short, but my goodness, I don't think I could have said it better myself.  Thank God for other poets, huh?  
Beri
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3 posted 1999-12-12 10:16 PM


Heehee, yes, Nan -- I do agree, if you can't have fun, then why bother?  And thanx Rachel ... and i do agree with you too -- Thank God for other poets, they do help me out so much!!  
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