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Ayla
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 50


0 posted 1999-12-12 09:40 AM


I wished you were here
Whenever I cry.
Hold me in your arms,
And tell me everything's fine.

I wished you were here
When I needed a friend.
To lend me a listening ear
And just hold my hand.

I wished you were here
Whenever it snows,
Take me in your embrace,
Protect me from the cold.

I wished you were here,
Now right by my side.
And tell me that you'd stay forever,
not just for the night.




 Yesterday is history.Tomorrow is a mystery.Today is a Gift.That's why we call it The Present. - The Millennium Bug

© Copyright 1999 Ayla - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
1 posted 1999-12-12 09:49 AM


This is a wish many have, i think.

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-12-12 10:59 AM


This makes me sad   I have had the same wishes.
lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 1999-12-12 11:10 AM


I can relate to the "Whenver it snows" part. It was terrible last night, snow, 70mph wind and no power for 9 hrs. Glad I had my woodstove's!
Loved your poem Ayla, I feel with you!

Theraaven
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since 1999-12-11
Posts 11

4 posted 1999-12-12 03:01 PM


Very Pretty, A wish I am sure most of us have made, A wish I am sure the stars grow weary of listening to......I can relate  )
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