To Touch Mine Heart - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #4

To Touch Mine Heart

Chaotic Rumblings
New Member

since 1999-11-12

Posts 8
Here, there, everywhere

0 posted 1999-11-12 03:17 AM

fell daemon I
thrice guilted child
trod ever lone
wrought faithless deeds
lost vision's eye
thoughts errant wild
feared nothing known
vice crushes needs
spoke careless words
deluded screams
heart's dying here
love's dying yon
come piercing shards
dove's ended dreams
fire casting sears
denuded song

[This message has been edited by Chaotic Rumblings (edited 11-12-1999).]

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-11-12 03:30 AM

This is a truly, truly amazing piece, C.R.
I can appreciate all the work behind this little gem as well as the "searing' emotion within it.

Michael

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-11-12 04:26 AM

This piece leaves even my jaded heart struck with a degree of awe.

------------------
Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 1999-11-12 09:03 AM

Excellent!! I loved the rhythm of this one!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.