There is no above in love....

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Open Poetry #4

There is no above in love....

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-12-11 01:41 AM

i rip the cords that make us unite
its a simple thing
just a little to the right
as you dig the knife
deeper into my spine
i guess your becoming blind
missing my heart by inches
yet love lost is amusing us
to stitches
doesnt it make you feel better?
to make this agression
as light as a feather..
its such a hell of a different kind
a sanity..
a peace thats never to be mine

SeaDragon
Junior Member

since 1999-12-11

Posts 11

1 posted 1999-12-11 01:50 AM

You're right--cord-sawing is a simple thing. I love the imagery of this poem. Love takes a piece of us every time.

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