Open Poetry #4 |
About waking up |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I dream of dreaming that I dreamt About the master’s masterpiece Of which, I could not understand A single theme, a single piece. I think I thought about a thought Which headed right out of my head, And for a second it was caught Just for a second, then it fled. And in that second, I remember Remembering what I had lost, I even thought that thought surrendered But it was heading for the coast To stop that thought, I stopped to think And lacking thought, I brought it back Just as the thought began to spring, The clock alarm had woke me up I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Some dream! This is so entertaining, Master! I love it! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wow ! You weave a nice dream. Guess that make you the Dream Weaver. Nice, nice job here. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely play with words, Master. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks everybody! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I like I like I like!!! Love the word play It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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paperguardian Junior Member
since 1999-12-07
Posts 25 |
Whoa - what a dream sequence! This pulls you through the words until you forget that it was a dream. I especially liked the word repetition, it makes the poem flow beautifully! Again -- great job! |
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