Open Poetry #4 |
Into My Life You Came |
Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Am I who you thought I'd be? For you've brought out the hidden me. I kept things locked inside myself. And placed my heart upon a shelf. Then one day into my life you came. And my heart you did quickly claim. For twenty five years you have been by my side. And in this heart you will always reside. We laughed, we smiled, we shared. We loved, we cried, we cared. To each other we had to adjust. But most important we had trust. Your gentle disposition is one of the best. To live this long with me, you surely passed the test. When I go off on a tangent and rant and rave. You sit back and chuckle, brush it off with a wave. Your loving spirit is warm and kind. A real treasure in you, I did find. We have lived and loved together for so long. And with each other is where we will always belong. ----------- This was written for a very special person - my husband, my best friend Patrick |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Beautiful Eloise. Does he know how lucky he is? B Gravitt |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Eloise! Sounds like the perfect relationship! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
'my husband - my best friend'....when those two comments lay side by side, you are blessed. Congrats to you both. To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Betty - It's pretty obvious that Patrick is a very lucky man ... and knows it ! Nicely put. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WOW! This was really touching. What a blessing it is indeed to have a relationship like that. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Denise - I think it is Balladeer, WhtDove - Thank you Betty, Marge - Trust me, I am the lucky one. I think I came out with the better deal. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Another lovely, Eloise. K |
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