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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 1999-12-09 04:56 PM



Once upon a time,
There was a poetess,
Searching for her soulmate,

One who would rescue her from her fortress,
This great wall of protection she had built
around her heart,

He has to be a protector,
And a soft gentle lover,

One of sympathy,
One of empathy,

He has to love completely,
have truth and open honesty,

She will be his heart, his soul, his breath,
He will love her till death,

He has to be kind,
Her friend,

Someone to love till the end,
Someone for better or for worse,

In sickness and in Health,
In poorness or wealth,

Someone faithful,
Forgiving and true,

Oh, MY prince Charming....


Where are You?
Where are YOU?.....





[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 12-09-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
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1 posted 1999-12-09 05:08 PM


Sometimes we miss what is right in front of us.  


 B Gravitt



Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-09 10:21 PM


Very lovely, Romantic Heart! Sometimes you have to kiss a few frogs before you find the one that is the prince! hehehehe  

 Denise



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3 posted 1999-12-09 11:45 PM


He's there, heart, and you will find each other....and the picture is beautiful.

 To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 1999-12-09 11:59 PM


This is a 'charming' poem.
You have a lovely heart.
The prince would do well to scale the walls and take you away !


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-12-10 01:55 AM


If you find him....let me know if he has a brother  
I enjoyed this.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 1999-12-10 05:28 AM


Betty What is in front of me???? Tell me???
Or should I say who?

De-I will put my frog kissers on to kiss them ...hehe
Balladeer-thanks for the encouragement and the Compliment(I'm blushing)

Marge-your heart is lovely as well! Thanks your so sweet

Hoot-I will contact you asap if he has a brother or a twin...LOL

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 1999-12-10 06:25 AM


Wow, this is really a romantic poem, written by a romantic woman with a romantic heart.  Take care of yourself and do whats right for you, enjoy the moment,  I believe romance will come to those who seek it and desire it.  I really enjoyed the lines "one of sympathy" and "one of empathy".   James
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
8 posted 1999-12-10 06:33 AM


Sometimes he appears at the most unexpected time, in the most unexpected place, in the most unexpected way, at the most unexpected time of your life. Just wait. He'll come.
Liz

lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
9 posted 1999-12-10 09:27 AM


This is a beautiful, romantic poem. His heart, his soul, his breath, very well said.
First__Knight
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10 posted 1999-12-11 09:24 PM


Among the common often are the true of heart found.  There lies your prince.  Charming is as charming does......you heart crys for that which it seeks....and therefore so will his....He calls for you too    This was a lovely calling.....I enjoyed it  

 Share what you are for you are what you share


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