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Open Poetry #4
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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A
0 posted 1999-12-09 01:08 AM

please say no
dont fall in
this is nothing
from what i bring
connect the swirling lines
burst upon the sun and speak to it
of what you have become
and hope it falls over you
as i do...




 
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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
1 posted 1999-12-09 02:49 AM

I'm trying to grasp the center of your poem and I can't - a poem with mystery is great!

K
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