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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-12-08 10:11 PM

It is so

Aromas float
Enchanted darkness.
Fish swim among the lotus.

Crickets chirp.
The breeze caresses.
Fantasies take our hand.

Unseen presence
Lifts the spirit
Phantoms lead our minds.

The lips pucker to the taste.
The door to everwhere
Is open.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-08 10:16 PM

Beautiful, Seymour! Just beautiful!

Denise

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

2 posted 1999-12-08 10:24 PM

So it is.
Simple and meaningful. Well done, Sy.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-12-08 10:26 PM

...and so be it!...

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-12-08 11:30 PM

You've said much! Short and to the point. Beautiful it is Seymour!

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Jesus is the reason for the season

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 1999-12-08 11:37 PM

Seymour -
You 'open' many 'doors'
Inspirational words from you
are always a pleasure to see.

I really like
'unseen presence lifts the spirit'
How very, very true.

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

6 posted 1999-12-09 12:11 PM

"The door to everywhere is open ..."

A beautiful line, and a beautiful poem.

--Kess

You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

7 posted 1999-12-09 05:33 AM

Would that the mind could follow the spirit
Liz

Betty Gravitt
Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 222
Georgia United States

8 posted 1999-12-09 05:43 AM

Seymour this is wonderful. " the door to everywhere is open". What a wonderful thought to begin my day with.

B Gravitt

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

9 posted 1999-12-09 05:48 AM

and what a beautiful thought to end my day with!
You are a poet of grace Sy.

K

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

10 posted 1999-12-09 05:56 AM

Sy, you continue to grow as a poet! I really liked this one there is such a depth in these few words! It is so....

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 1999-12-09 08:20 AM

To all of the above.
I am overwhelmed by the response to this simple poem. God bless you all.

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

12 posted 1999-12-09 08:48 AM

Simply beautiful Sy....

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 1999-12-09 03:33 PM

Ah, so.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 1999-12-09 09:03 PM

Pepper and Sunshine,
To my two beautiful and ah so,
It is so. *L*

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

15 posted 1999-12-10 12:50 PM

I like it and it's really complex.

lostboy
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since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

16 posted 1999-12-10 01:11 PM

This is a really cool one Sy. I like it!

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