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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 1999-12-08 10:15 AM


Time is such a simple gift
that we give to one another
maybe in the way we talk
or when a sister hugs a brother

Often it's invisible to anybody else
the way we stop to say hello
listening in detail to all of the reply
watching the smile appear and grow

Noticing when someone is missing
and taking time to ask them why
could it be their child is ill
or that someone may have died

Sharing in the good news of a triumph
halving a problem knowing it's been shared
the knowledge you've brought peace or joy
because *you* took the time to care

It's the little things that count in this world
not the measure of your house or car
or whether you're big, thin, fat or small
but in sharing the gift of who you are

So this Christmas present needs no wrapping
its value isn't limited and will last you all year through
and I'll be tying mine up with just a few treasured words
to show you with a little time that I do indeed care about you...

HUGS all

< !signature-->

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-08-1999).]

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suthern
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1 posted 1999-12-08 10:28 AM


This is beautiful, RG!!
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-12-08 10:39 AM


Thank you Rainbow Girl
Hugs Back  

Pepper
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3 posted 1999-12-08 10:40 AM


What a heart you have, my friend....
Very touching and beautiful piece Rainbow.....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



JTF
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4 posted 1999-12-08 10:47 AM


Beautiful poem Rainbow ... and I love this new picture of yours ...  

HUSG

Iloveit
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5 posted 1999-12-08 10:49 AM


beautiful, just like you, and you give the best presents when you give of yourself

big hugs

and me too....love your new pic

paperguardian
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6 posted 1999-12-08 10:52 AM


Your poem really makes me reflect.  Where has my time been going and to who?  But most of all - has my time been spent in love?  Thank you for such a great perspective.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 1999-12-08 11:52 AM


RainbowGirl,
You write as pretty as a rainbow.
Enjoyed.

miriam
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8 posted 1999-12-08 02:24 PM


what better food for the soul than your beautiful poetry.  We tend to forget what christmas is all about.  Thank you for reminding me that it's  more than countless hours at the mall buying gifts.  


  miriam coronado



Severn
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9 posted 1999-12-08 02:54 PM


RG - what a gift, the best of all.

Wonderful work!

K

RainbowGirl
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10 posted 1999-12-08 04:30 PM


Thank you!

HUGS< !signature-->

 Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream...



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-08-1999).]

Balladeer
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11 posted 1999-12-08 05:51 PM


Rainbow, your friendship would be a wonderful gift to anyone. Beautiful words.

Rainbow, you're a little mouse?
A mouse who looks a little soused?
Sitting in a champagne glass
Looking drunk on your.......?  

lostboy
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12 posted 1999-12-08 07:10 PM


What a nice Christmas present Rainbow! Hugs and Happy Holidays to you!!
Denise
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13 posted 1999-12-09 12:42 PM


What a beautiful gift, Rainbow! Thanks so much! HUGS  

 Denise



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14 posted 2005-04-15 05:04 PM


good thoughts
Artic Wind
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15 posted 2007-11-12 07:06 PM


Love the poem, love the name

ARCTIC WIND

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