Open Poetry #4 |
Time |
RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Time is such a simple gift < !signature-->that we give to one another maybe in the way we talk or when a sister hugs a brother Often it's invisible to anybody else the way we stop to say hello listening in detail to all of the reply watching the smile appear and grow Noticing when someone is missing and taking time to ask them why could it be their child is ill or that someone may have died Sharing in the good news of a triumph halving a problem knowing it's been shared the knowledge you've brought peace or joy because *you* took the time to care It's the little things that count in this world not the measure of your house or car or whether you're big, thin, fat or small but in sharing the gift of who you are So this Christmas present needs no wrapping its value isn't limited and will last you all year through and I'll be tying mine up with just a few treasured words to show you with a little time that I do indeed care about you... HUGS all Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-08-1999).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, RG!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you Rainbow Girl Hugs Back |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
What a heart you have, my friend.... Very touching and beautiful piece Rainbow..... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Beautiful poem Rainbow ... and I love this new picture of yours ... HUSG |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
beautiful, just like you, and you give the best presents when you give of yourself big hugs and me too....love your new pic |
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paperguardian Junior Member
since 1999-12-07
Posts 25 |
Your poem really makes me reflect. Where has my time been going and to who? But most of all - has my time been spent in love? Thank you for such a great perspective. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RainbowGirl, You write as pretty as a rainbow. Enjoyed. |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
what better food for the soul than your beautiful poetry. We tend to forget what christmas is all about. Thank you for reminding me that it's more than countless hours at the mall buying gifts. miriam coronado |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
RG - what a gift, the best of all. Wonderful work! K |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you! HUGS< !signature--> Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-08-1999).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Rainbow, your friendship would be a wonderful gift to anyone. Beautiful words. Rainbow, you're a little mouse? A mouse who looks a little soused? Sitting in a champagne glass Looking drunk on your.......? |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
What a nice Christmas present Rainbow! Hugs and Happy Holidays to you!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
What a beautiful gift, Rainbow! Thanks so much! HUGS Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good thoughts |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Love the poem, love the name ARCTIC WIND |
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