Open Poetry #4 |
Don't Cry For Me |
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Don’t Cry for me Don’t cry for me when I am gone, and this life progresses to the next... Remember me with smiles and pleasant thoughts. Don’t throw dirt on my grave, as my body lies cold and still and my soul soars... Bury hatred and cruelty and let the anger go, not me. Do not cut flowers to lay on my casket or on my grave they will only fade and rot with time... Plant seeds of happiness instead and let them grow. Don’t shout at the skies, as they pour forth in rain, for when the storm ends... The sun will once more shine and things will seem brighter. Don’t cry for me when I am gone, for in you; I will always live. "When you come to the edge of the light which is all you know. And are about to step off into the darkness that is unknown...Faith is knowing one of two things will happen...there will be something to stand on...or you will learn how to fly." -Unknown Dear God...please give me wings! [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 12-07-1999).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh..this is beautiful Hoot.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
How bittersweet. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
inspiring, for sure. Nice work, Ruth. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was beautiful, I like the dripping rose Great effects! God will lead you to the light! Blessings |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Hoot!!! And the poet is too! *G* Now if only those smiles for me won't be of the "thank goodness she's gone and no longer an aggravation!" variety! LOL |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ruth - this almost akin to Balladeer's 'When I am gone'. I think this is beautiful, my dear. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful Ruth! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful poem from a beautiful poet!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Beautiful Hoot. If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
This is beautiful Ruth. Reminiscent of Shakespeare: "No longer mourn for me when I am dead ... Nay if you read this line, remember not The hand that writ it, for I love you so That I in your sweet thoughts would be forgot ..." Very beautiful. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Lost for words Ruth..... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Lady Hoot: A very touching piece... both beautiful and sad. I bow to you and yours with wishes sent for a brighter tomarrow. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I feel like crying and you are not even dead....Your words touch me |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a very touching piece, Ruth. Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you everyone for reading and for your kind words |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot - This is stirring and beautiful. Accentuation with the artwork is captivating. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent poem....excellent presentation....beautiful lady. To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marge...thank you Balladeer....I'm blushing here, but thanks |
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