Open Poetry #4 |
Shooting Star |
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Shooting Star Still night Moon glowing bright and full. Streak of iridescence. Fervent wish to the gods. Little did I know she was wishing on the same star for the same thing. You. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Tara, this is definitely the way to get a good message in a few words. Others CAN be wishing for the same thing we are. Someone gets disappointed. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a beautiful poem, Tara! So much truth! Denise |
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
Tara: You seem to be on your way to having all your wishes come true. My wish is that they do come true for you. Courage is the price that life exacts for granting peace with yourself. --Amelia Earhart |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Well put...and sadly true. It is so difficult when you're falling in love. All the best to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So few words...so much said |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Speaks volumes.... Like this much Tara! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thanks for reading! But I think I'm on a roll, so MY wish is going to come true! It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I wish for your wish to come true and if it doesn't that there will be another wish that will. |
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