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Love Will Come
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Love Will Come |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Love Will Come Sequestered spirits sway Sleepless nights, days Ferries follow streams To crystalline dreams Starry eyes ablaze Waiting our lives long The heart’s divine song Intoning desires With all that inspires Love will come along Travelling nighttime skies Turning planets at sunrise Wishing-wells fill with coins Shattered heart rejoins Hopelessness fades, dies Ascension, finally flying Feather, weight defying It was always within reach Holding sand on the beach Love for us undying And in His repeating song Sung to us the nightlong Love will come along © 1999 Corinne Bailey |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Beautiful! I loved the rhyme scheme you used. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Corinne, simply beautiful!  Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I agree. Extremely well constructed, Corinne. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Denise, Tara and Balladeer! Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Great rhyme scheme in this one |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Corinne, this is simply Beautiful! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Well done, I enjoyed. |
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