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Love Speaks |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
We inhale the sweet fragrance of lilac. Crickets and peepers play their serenade. On moss, 'neath a willow we settle back. Together we ponder the world God made. The sky is painted by coming sunset. The falling sun sets your hair all aglow. We feel like new lovers only just met. Each others secrets we already know. The night sings of seduction and romance. Too slowly the darkness conquers the day. Stars dot the sky in their celestial dance. Bright fireflies swarm like angels at play. Love speaks of starry skies and moonlit walks. It thrives on the truth and heart-to-heart talks. ©1999 DreamEvil < !signature--> Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 12-06-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lost for words. I will reiterate: !exclaim!exclaim!exclaim!!! Brilliant, dark one - just brilliant - and the light that crept in... K |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DreamEvil - Very nicely done, my friend. Enjoyed reading it ... thrice. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How I envy that couple!! *S* This is beautiful, DE... well done! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nicely written and very romantic. I like that! Liz |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
Gorgeous! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
well done. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DE: superb!!! HUGS Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful words, Scott! This one of your best! I love this! (submit this one!)  |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Beautiful, Scott. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful work of art, Dream! I love it! Denise |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
I especially liked the imagery in these lines.... The sky is painted by coming sunset. The falling sun sets your hair all aglow I can see you watching your lover, with solt glow of the setting sun in your eyes and heart.....lovely work! Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Can feel the love here, and I am envious! You painted wonderful images! Corinne |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Now these are the poems I enjoy most from you, Scott. It buried deep, I know...but when it works it way to the surface...POW! Great work. This is beautiful, really. |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
this very beautiful, i enjoyed it very much, i got a chance to reminisce upon this feeling, a heart needs that in the hard times so thank you! |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
this very beautiful, i enjoyed it very much, i got a chance to reminisce upon this feeling, a heart needs that in the hard times so thank you! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Beautiful piece of work here.....I like it a lot Share what you are for you are what you share |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Love certainly does speak here...Beautiful Soul-Brother. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Scott, I have got to say this...of everything you have written, of everything of yours I have read, this is by far my absolute favorite...love does speak and with this, you have given it its voice....wonderful  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My apologies for taking so long to give them, but to all those who have responded you have my thanks. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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