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Open Poetry #4
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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A
0 posted 1999-12-05 10:24 PM

just a second of your time
fact or fiction
you would be mine
and crows do stutter
while your dead
black and bleeding
all critics rejoice
its like your master said
we all bow down sometime
even if divine
theres no peak in here
only down
how did i forget
when we've never even met..



 
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Rachel_A
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since 1999-11-30
Posts 70
North Webster, IN USA
1 posted 1999-12-07 10:33 PM

i really liked this, especially the end.  this reminds me of an stp or nirvana song.
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