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Commitment (A repost)
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Commitment (A repost) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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For Liz a little bit of Hyde. Commitment The tongue of a bell strikes the shell. The shell cries out a double tell. The pressure swells and circles fly, To infinity the cry. Vibrations we think as frail, Forever and ever wail. Nirvana within the core, Touches and tastes every shore. Torment of a sensuous soul, Lays the scars inside the goal. Doubt makes for shady mortar. Apocalypse, has no quarter. Garrotted are the thoughts instead, Promised when the chalice bled. Holy vows and oaths they swore, Toast of hemlocks, evermore. She, the tongue that struck the shell, And I, the wrung and tolling bell. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Very nice. I like this one a lot. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Mr. Hyde, Does this mean you can't write passionate poetry? Please don't ever stop doing that or our hearts will suffocate! Forget Jekell and Hyde, lets go back to Cain. He's the man! Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well - just as long you as you are a tolling bell of poetry Sy, I have no complaints! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I agree with Severn!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ohme, Thank you so much, that is all I was looking for. Liz, I just sort of liked that poem. Severn, It's all just poetry some nice, some not so nice, love you all. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I like it ,too - lots! Liz |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
A beautiful and crisp depiction of committed love. Lotsa envy, Sy.  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
(My friend Sea has convinced me to do this in a nice pretty colour just for you Sy. Isn't this great?!) Oh - and whaddya mean 'It's all just poetry'!!!? Tch tch - poetry is life! Breath! Hang on...getting carried away, but you know what I mean. K |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
No relationship can survive without committment! Another beautiful poem, Seymour! I love all these new options too! Denise |
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