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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-12-04 10:23 AM


In The Land Of Dreams
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

In the land of dreams
I seek your face.
Nothing comforts me more
than knowing you are here with me,
just as before.

I call out to you
and hold you close.
My body knows your touch,
as when we both were young,
and loved each other
just as much.

In the solitude of reflection,
I smile when I remember.
How can it be that we just met
one year ago .... December ?

I've known you before.
I know you again.
It's always been this way.
I remember that I loved you
long before this day.

Only in my dreams?
I really don't believe
that's true,
for upon awakening ...
I still have knowledge of you.

You are not
and were not
a dream.

You are as real
a love
as I
ever
dreamed
you'd be.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This poem was done for my
spiritual counter-part who I met,
in this lifetime, one year ago.
Thank you, my ~Warrior~

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
lostboy
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1 posted 1999-12-04 10:40 AM


Beautiful Marge. I too know this feeling.
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2 posted 1999-12-05 08:14 AM


The best part of this piece is the tribute to your spiritual partner...I'm so glad you know more than one plane.
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3 posted 1999-12-05 08:22 AM


Beautiful Marge, I remember well when this happened to me. Aren't we blessed?
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 1999-12-05 04:36 PM


LostBoy- Thanks ... nice feeling, huh?

Sunshine - The plane of recognition of a spiritual counterpart is very real to me.

Betty G. - Yes.  It is a moment to remember for sure.  


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 1999-12-05 05:39 PM


This is beautiful, Marge. Thanks for sharing!

 Denise


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