Open Poetry #4 |
A Few Words |
Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
A statement lost What has passed by As orators Our lot to try Some have felt What we must say None have dealt With it this way A pain remembered Thus in verse Can hold it's torment So much the worse Yet through expression Dissipate And leave but marks As chalk on slate ------------------ Sometimes nonsense isn't . |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Wonderful! There's a lot to this and it's done so concisely. Truth falling on deaf ears... somehow this sounds familiar... I thought it and you wrote it. Lovely! dp |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I enjoy your pensive side as much as your humorous one, Doc.... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Love this - very well done. K |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Doreen, Nan , Severn, Thanks for the comments , The king of cups stopped by the other day, and together with the duke of drink , we had a few . I was forced to use very few words so I would not slur them all over my keyboard . |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Add another Wonderful Doc Moose!!! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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