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FALLEN ANGEL
Junior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 19
BROWNSVILLE, TX, USA

0 posted 1999-12-04 02:27 AM


THE FEELING II: SOLUTION

THAT FEELING,
THAT TERRORIZING,
HAUNTING,
STALKING FEELING.
YOU KNOW THE ONE.
THROUGH OUT THIS WORLD I WAS DOOMED TO STUMBLE,
BUT NOW THIS WORLD I SHALL HUMBLE.
AT MY SIDE,
MY LOVE SHALL BE.
BECAUSE YOU SEE,
THAT EDGE,
THAT CLIFF,
SHE SAVED ME FROM.
SHE REACHED INSIDE,
SNAGGED THE MONSTER FROM MY CHEST,
LOCKED IT UP,
AND BANISHED IT.
SO NOW THIS LIFE I WILL RULE.
SOUL MATE AT MY SIDE.
ONE DAY SHE SHALL BE MY BRIDE.
SO THIS FEELING I CONQUERED,
WITH THE HELP OF MY LOVE.
KIND OF IRONIC,
THE CAUSE,
WAS THE SOLUTION!

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Athas
Junior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 24
Edinburgh, Scotland
1 posted 1999-12-04 07:34 AM


Wow like this one too. Prefer the solution actually more hopefull.

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