Open Poetry #4 |
Macbeth 2 |
Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
* So this would sound better when you read it, read until the period not the end of the line. Dear heart, I’m told, you have no eyes. I order you to see no fear nor pine About being blind. Yet, you can see-- truth lies in time; And only time will prove, “truth lies!” And words do bind Us with the illusions that we chase. All fair is foul—all foul is fair, And greater still is that Which can be neither. And yet, disgrace Does have a pretty face. I’m aware Of it, yet not so glad To see it. How quickly blood is spilled- It dries much slower than an ocean, While being far more brute... “God save the king!” Macbeth is ill With fear, and stripped of his emotion He stands before You nude. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
You, Sir, are on a roll! Great work! ------------------ It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I thank you, Ma'am, for replying! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Pretty good! I do enjoy Shakespeare, and your work also Master! |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Ofcourse, you like me more, right? *S* |
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