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Master
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0 posted 1999-12-03 10:50 PM


* So this would sound better when you read it, read until the period not the end of the line.

Dear heart, I’m told, you have no eyes.
I order you to see no fear nor pine
About being blind.
Yet, you can see-- truth lies in time;
And only time will prove, “truth lies!”
And words do bind
Us with the illusions that we chase.
All fair is foul—all foul is fair,
And greater still is that
Which can be neither. And yet, disgrace
Does have a pretty face. I’m aware
Of it, yet not so glad
To see it. How quickly blood is spilled-
It dries much slower than an ocean,
While being far more brute...
“God save the king!” Macbeth is ill
With fear, and stripped of his emotion
He stands before You nude.

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 1999-12-03 10:54 PM


You, Sir, are on a roll! Great work!

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It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Master
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2 posted 1999-12-03 11:02 PM


I thank you, Ma'am, for replying!
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3 posted 1999-12-04 12:13 PM


Pretty good! I do enjoy Shakespeare, and your work also Master!
Master
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4 posted 1999-12-04 10:51 AM


Ofcourse, you like me more, right? *S*
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