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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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0 posted 1999-12-03 06:40 PM


To give is divine
To recieve is not mine
To those who didn't care
Too late , you're not there

'till thoughts re-arranged
'till conciousness strained
'till what that remains
'tis all in one vein

Once ,there was one
Once , things were done
Once , it was fun
Once , we were young

Twice, now retold
Twice , now and old
Twice, then again
Thrice,missed you my friend



© Copyright 1999 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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1 posted 1999-12-08 06:52 AM


Interesting...shouldn't have been missed like your friend!

I'm not too sure what you mean Moose - care to tell?

(Some people say a good poet is a confusing one...LOL  )

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-12-08 10:12 AM


Yes, very interesting Dr. Moose...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-12-08 10:43 AM


I love the presentation of this...great format!
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-12-08 11:56 AM


Dr.Moose1,
Cute and not a bit mute.
Enjoyed.

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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Redlands,CA,USA
5 posted 1999-12-08 03:45 PM


Hmmm… If anyone would be missed it would be you our dear Moose.  I think I got the meaning down after a couple of reads, but who's to say but you. My read on it… lost love of a time gone by.  Hey… if you see Ian tell him I've got a spot that needs some attention. C-ya in the 'Stute.
Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
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6 posted 1999-12-08 08:08 PM


Hmmm... well I like the words, but I'll just wait until I figure out what you are trying for before I go any farther.  
Nan
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7 posted 1999-12-08 10:10 PM


It's best not to question the Doc... He gets Cratchety.... Just enjoy.....   
Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA
8 posted 1999-12-09 04:56 PM


Well ,
This started out as a self indulgent " who needs you" kind of piece . From there it progressed to a middle of the road " yeah we had a few good times" , and then finally ended up being a sentimental ( but honest )
" I will never forget you " . Kinda ran the gamut of emotions . As to what I was trying to say ? I haven't the faintest idea !And no I do not get Cratchity!And anyone who says so will have to answer to me !

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