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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
To give is divine To recieve is not mine To those who didn't care Too late , you're not there 'till thoughts re-arranged 'till conciousness strained 'till what that remains 'tis all in one vein Once ,there was one Once , things were done Once , it was fun Once , we were young Twice, now retold Twice , now and old Twice, then again Thrice,missed you my friend |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Interesting...shouldn't have been missed like your friend! I'm not too sure what you mean Moose - care to tell? (Some people say a good poet is a confusing one...LOL  ) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes, very interesting Dr. Moose...  A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I love the presentation of this...great format! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose1, Cute and not a bit mute. Enjoyed. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hmmm… If anyone would be missed it would be you our dear Moose. I think I got the meaning down after a couple of reads, but who's to say but you. My read on it… lost love of a time gone by. Hey… if you see Ian tell him I've got a spot that needs some attention. C-ya in the 'Stute. |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Hmmm... well I like the words, but I'll just wait until I figure out what you are trying for before I go any farther. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's best not to question the Doc... He gets Cratchety.... Just enjoy.....  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Well , This started out as a self indulgent " who needs you" kind of piece . From there it progressed to a middle of the road " yeah we had a few good times" , and then finally ended up being a sentimental ( but honest ) " I will never forget you " . Kinda ran the gamut of emotions . As to what I was trying to say ? I haven't the faintest idea !And no I do not get Cratchity!And anyone who says so will have to answer to me ! |
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