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A Vision |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
When I first saw you I couldn't stop myself from reaching out My love was hard to hide Together, we are one Our world is a place where dreams come true And hearts are not broken You look into my eyes You see through me and touch my soul Like a warm, unexpected wind The one who crossed our paths Now guides us down a road Where loves grows like spring flowers With your slighest touch You light a candle inside me An eternal flame to withstand any storm I behold your vision With passing years, lines will deepen And you're more beautiful than ever We melt when we hold close As a fallen snowflake in the desert Beneath a sky unmatched by your blue eyes You are my peace, my purpose, my life You bring to me with each new day Love, strength, happiness and hope for tomorrow. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very Beautiful Liz |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
My soul has been touched by the beauty of your words, So long have I awaited, For such beauty to be heard, For each word, a drop of water to my hungering thirst, I feel my heart about to burst! For it was dead, Now alive, I have been awakend in my slumbers sleep, I have been revived, With these words I shall keep! |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Liz, thanks for your words, much appreciated! ARH, you "are" a romantic heart and have touched me by your response..I'm glad I was able to revive you, you are more than welcome to these words!! |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Lostboy, Your poem was very beautiful and touched me very deeply. Keep up the great work! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostBoy - I liked very much the imagery here. When someone lights our candle, we fairly glow from the light. May your candle stay lit, though it may flicker in the wind, for when it flickers it's merely dancing. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ahhh....(fanning self) "We melt.....as a fallen snowflake in the desert..." An absloutely astounding idea!! This whole thing was fabulously written with emotional beauty and love! You are truly a romantic ........what a touch!! ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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