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Rocky Cliff |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Rocky Cliff I climbed a rocky cliff failing to use common sense. The rocks crumbling below my feet causing an avalanche type effect. My friend safely on the ground now has danger approaching furiously. If only I had applied common sense before climbing a rocky cliff. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Is this literal or figurative? Either way, I picture it. I like this one, it can mean different things. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
lostboy: This is figurative. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lost Dreamer...this is well written, but I truly hope it isn't in regards to last nights conversation. As I said, please do not be concerned...you did nothing. Hugs  Ruth |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth, Thank you very much. The Owl in your name suits you very well. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Even without knowing details, it is a good poem, dreamer. Unintentional actions can cause unintentional harm for sure. |
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