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Sun Sets ... To Rise Again
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Sun Sets ... To Rise Again |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sun Sets ... To Rise Again ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 The azure sky put to rest ... with the palette of colors God uses at sunset. Sunsets glow pulling the cover of night around her. Over the lake she dips her rays into the waters edge. Shades of magenta touch the horizon, blending upward into a palette of crimson rose. As she dips further the colors scheme to become the most beautiful array. Almost without warning she's gone except for one last kiss of midnight blue. With the morning she rises from the lake again. Proudly wearing deep orange peeking from behind soft, soft shades of yellow streaking. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lovin' it.... I can't read enough sunshiny poems....  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, what beautiful imagery my friend. Well written |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge Your poetry radiates, as always This is beautiful Liz |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I like this soo much. Incredible descriptions. This should hold me for the winter! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Great imagery! I just love watching sunsets. You've described it very well. Sunrises too! ------------------ <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Like this Marge.... like it a lot, thanks. |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Marge You paint a beautiful picture with your words. *Smile* |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marge: You paint the best of visions.. HUGS ------------------ Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
It makes me want to pull up a chair and enjoy!! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
have often tried to capture a special sunset in words, you have done so beautifully :-) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan - And lots of happy sunsets to greet you. Hoot - It only came from watching the sun at the end of an otherwise so-so day. Elizabeth, my friend - You make even a compliment radiate. LostBoy - I hope that you get to share in the beauty of it through many winters. WhiteDove - There is a different 'picture' painted every morning and evening. UKHero - And my thanks to you for liking it. Dolphins3 - God paints the sunsets and sunrises ... I can only let you know what I see. So glad you liked it. RainbowGirl - Ah, what a vision it was. OhMe - Come join me on the porch swing. Beki - Enjoy my sunsets with me. I am so very glad that I was able to 'capture' it and share it with you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ To each of you, my friends ... I'm so glad to have shared this lovely moment. Thanks to all of you for visualizing it. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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