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I said I loved her
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I said I loved her |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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This is just a little of my weird humor. I said I loved her When I was young and blind in love I said I'd love her when her hair turned white. But it never did. I said I'd love her no matter times shift. And she had a face lift. And I said I loved her figure and derriere Now it's much too ample there. And I said we would love you forever. Now it's seldom if ever. Life is strange and stranger still Since I have become a similar pill. But in reality I love her still For I see her through the eyes of youth And the eyes of youth are my truth. Amen and so help me. |
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Rachel_A Member
since 1999-11-30
Posts 70North Webster, IN USA |
I really like this. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your wierd humor sits well with me, Sy. I like it much. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy Life is strange , it wears no mask Recognizing is the task Love is strange, it often blinds But then again, there are all kinds Many ways , no bound it sees And it comes in all degrees You have surely both been blessed For your love has passed time's test Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well - the weirdo revealed!!!! LOL - this is great Sy. Well done indeed.  K |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're a pretty comPassionate dude, Sy.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rachel, I thank you and if you liked it, it says alot. Balladeer, Thanks for the sits well, I had my doubts. Severn, Thank you so much glad it was well taken I was a little worried. *L* Nan, Do you realy think so? *L* Liz, It's hard to keep up with your quick wit I'm just happy no one took a fit. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I find it just a liitle weird That weird you think yourself to be I find not weirdness in your humor Nor in anything that I see Your humor does not make me soar Your poetry takes me out to space I'm empassioned with your every verse But then, this is a passionate place You have a way of putting words And your words are thrush's song My heart skips a hundred beats With each verse I read along That's why I am a passionate friend And forever I will be A passionate poet until the end Passionate lover, passionate mother Passionate lover of nature's wealth Passionate in each daily task And look passionately within myself This poem does not make passions fly But drizzles us with loving warmth And love for you ever enhanced Like sitting by your winter hearth The man behind the poetry Just as normal as they come But the poetry from his pen Will empassion me til kingdom come Love ya, Elizabeth |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Cool Sy! Very cool! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This reminds me that when I see a photograph of myself, my husband must love me the way I see myself in my mind...so I bless him for that. Good job, Sy, of putting truths forefront. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I like your weird humor cause it doesn't seem so weird. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I don't think it's all that weird Sy!! I liked this!! Bridgette ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, To kingdom come, to kingdom come How fast my poetry does run. It seems to slide a greecy pole And disappear into a hole. I love your rhyme I love your verse And into it I do immerse. It makes no difference what the deed As long as you have writ the read. *L* Lost boy, Like your cool since I live in Florida. Sunshine, I'm sure he loves you and will always for beayty is in the eyes of the beholder and to him you are beautiful, as you are to me. Ohme, Funny is a funny fly You never know anothers high. Justblew, Weird can be funny to some and you are one of that some. Thank you. |
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