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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-02 07:14 PM


Do you remember this day,
This is how we became friends,
Do you remember this place,
Look around what do you see,
Don't you see a change,
It has been a long time,
We'vent come here for awhile,
Let me see If you remember anything special on this day,
You make my day when you say you love me,
This day when ou love shone over the sea,
This is day when you give me your hand,
You said yes,
When I asked you to marry me,
On this day,

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Jewl_24_1999
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1 posted 1999-12-02 07:39 PM


ahhh, great poem.
Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-02 08:43 PM


Lovely sentiments! Very sweet!

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Denise


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