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Martie
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0 posted 1999-12-02 06:56 PM


The Lost and Found

Fall has found me at last
with its bright sky.
It has unfurled and danced
across my vision as I listened
to the soft muted sound of trees,
dreaming and lost and forgetful

Fall has turned the sunny heat
of my longing
into a broken leaf strewn sidewalk
crunched into tiny fragments
of feeling,
where you brush
me against the wall
with the coolness of your breathe.

I have lost your song
to the birds flying, flying
away to a more noble tree,
I dance to silence
in search of summer’s symphonies.

Was the vision of September
a wave that horizons only see
on days when fools are made?
I am lost without this illusion,
forsaken by my own skin,
cold and shrunken.

The cement holds the heat,
slow to give up, until time
and night bring the chilling
and I call your name
across the idle hours of morning
and warm to your answering call.

I was never gone,
it was you that was missing.



© Copyright 1999 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 1999-12-02 07:10 PM


Lovely ending! Beatiful!
Liz

Denise
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2 posted 1999-12-02 08:32 PM


Very beautiful, Martie!

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Denise


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3 posted 1999-12-02 08:54 PM


Martie...your talents as a poet are growing stronger with every piece you post. I find myself seeing your name and looking forward to what ever surprise your words may hold this time
Ruth

Martie
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4 posted 1999-12-02 09:29 PM


Liz, Denise --this friendship here at Passions means alot to me. Thank you for your comments and Ruth, thank you so much for the sweet reply you gave.
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