Open Poetry #4 |
The Lost and Found |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The Lost and Found Fall has found me at last with its bright sky. It has unfurled and danced across my vision as I listened to the soft muted sound of trees, dreaming and lost and forgetful Fall has turned the sunny heat of my longing into a broken leaf strewn sidewalk crunched into tiny fragments of feeling, where you brush me against the wall with the coolness of your breathe. I have lost your song to the birds flying, flying away to a more noble tree, I dance to silence in search of summer’s symphonies. Was the vision of September a wave that horizons only see on days when fools are made? I am lost without this illusion, forsaken by my own skin, cold and shrunken. The cement holds the heat, slow to give up, until time and night bring the chilling and I call your name across the idle hours of morning and warm to your answering call. I was never gone, it was you that was missing. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely ending! Beatiful! Liz |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Very beautiful, Martie! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Martie...your talents as a poet are growing stronger with every piece you post. I find myself seeing your name and looking forward to what ever surprise your words may hold this time Ruth |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz, Denise --this friendship here at Passions means alot to me. Thank you for your comments and Ruth, thank you so much for the sweet reply you gave. |
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