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My Lorelei - Not a morning girl
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My Lorelei - Not a morning girl |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion 
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Lorelei lounges there, In our marriage bed. Sleepy eyes and rumpled hair, Wrapped up in our bedspread. She's not a morning greeter, Sunrise she'd rather miss, But still she wakes up sweeter, When we share our wakeup kiss. She's my angel of the morning, She's my devil late at night. She changes without warning, All I need is hold her tight. She's everything I ever wanted, She completes me in every way. The angel and devil I once hunted, Is in my heart and soul to stay. Love ya, lil Lorelei... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I don't guess I need to tell you how lucky y'all are... your poem says you know! *S* Well done, sailor... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LJA....oh, how sweet. I hope she enjoys it as much as I did. What a nice tribute to your better half  ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hootessa - I prefer to think of Lorelei as my equal half - lol - but then again, since I don't get equal say, equal number of O's, equal rights to apologies,... well, you know how it is with men/women relationships... I gues she is my better half - lol - thank you for the kudos Belle - thank you for that verey sweet tribute... I hope all is going well out your way. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
LJA: What a lovely image your poem conjures up, the perfect mirror for you.. HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is so lovely, I love it. : ) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh, Lng Jhn, this is so very lovely....I know this will mean the world to Lorelei.....makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is so lovely, loved it ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well said Sir John... got a lady that's much the same. Ya gotta love them. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
An angel and a devil all wrapped up into one. What a perfect tribute to your wife, Michael. Congrats to you both. My ex-wife was like that, too.....she just got the times mixed up! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
LOL - This is great LJA - Especially when I can visualize that huge bedroom....... um...seems like such a vivid picture.... was I there???? um...... shutting up now... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sweet! ------------------ Denise |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Nan Yep - you was there - but that's our little secret, right? oops - I guess it WAS it our little secret - lol 'Deer - lol @places and time As for you ladies - if you want a man to love you as much as I love lil Lorelei, all you hafta do is demand intimacy the way Lorelei demands it of me. She is insatiable, and I love her for the way she makes me need her every minute of my life - you may not want to be intimate every night, and he may not want that, too - but do it anyway and you will find that bonding you've always wanted and needed is only a touch away. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
LJA...Seriously for a moment, many of us, the guys and gals alike, only dream of what you two have together....and it's wonderful. I know, (and so do you) another lady that would be like this....she'd make a wonderful partner for sure. You have something fantastic my friend, don't ever let it go! [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-12-1999).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Listen to LJA! Demand intimacy?.....yea right....I can hear him telling his friends now; "That's right by God, I make love to my wife every single time she wants it!" |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
My heart is so full of love for this sailor, he amazes me with all the sweetness he manages to write..and in truth he is just as sweet in real life. And the part about demending...well, what's wrong with persistance? I'm sure most guys are masters at it!!! It's about tiem us ladies get to demand a little too. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lor: He's grinning too broadly to garner much sympathy about your demands! *G* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'll have what they're having!!! |
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Tweety Junior Member
since 1999-11-10
Posts 26stute, of insanity, Passions to be more |
Sweets, dis here bird don't wike mawnings either.  [This message has been edited by Tweety (edited 11-14-1999).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LJA what a wonderful poem you write for her! I hope you guys always have happiness! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Some poems just make me smile. A |
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