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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 1999-12-02 12:14 PM


I've been to the stars,
I've been to the moon,
But the thought of you holding me,
Feels that your love is closer than before,
Without looking back with those years I spent good times with you,
Without showing me a world,
What's love all about?
I know ,you can't hear my voice ,
So I put these words on my poem,
And wanted to show the world that I still miss those arms around me,
I know you're across the miles betwwen the time and space,
How can a person so far from reach just come and risk my heart away,
How can you feel the heart beat what I'm doing without your love,
Wondering If you're also looking at the stars,
Think about the same way I feel for you,
I'll walk thousands miles just to feel your touch,
Ijust want to feel that you're near,
Even though you're across the miles between the time and space,

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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-12-02 11:45 PM


Don't you hate it when there's distance (feels like galaxies!) between you and the one you love - I've often sat wondering, like what they're doing right then.....what's going on in their day....etc.
Thanks for sharing such a lovely thought!

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-12-03 10:19 AM


Welcome to Passions! I've wondered the same thing myself. When you're thinking of them are they thinking of you too? Thanks

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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
3 posted 1999-12-03 12:22 PM


vandana,
You fill the distance with your poetry,
Why not send him a poem?
Liz

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