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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
What echoes of love brought me to this place? What forces above bring my passion low? Would embracing hate help lessen disgrace? Is it far too late to reap what I sow? Is love redemption for sins of the past? Is there exemption from the human race? Can fresh pain atone for doubts miscast? What suffering known will kindness erase? What question's answer will set my soul free? What unknown cancer drives me from my mind? Do the tides of fate still turn against me? How can I relate when I feel maligned? Might joy in my Art embrace my curse? Does wisdom impart a more noble creed? Must I feel so numb when I write my verse? Does justice succumb to exigent need? ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Ah, laddie, laddie...'tis a fine broth o' questions ye've set before fer sure! An' a fine poem fa a' o' that. methinks the answers may be a bit harder to obtain. Dinna ye ken? |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Ah Scott, if you find those answers, please share them. Questions such as these send many a person searching...Well done of course as always! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Is numbness not safety sometimes? It's not always a bad thing... Here for you dear friend. Fantastic poem - as usual! hey - do what I said and go look in the mirror OK? |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I like not what the mirror sees for it reflects not the truth of me. Christopher, I will be glad to share any answers with you, but I fear there are none. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'm with Chris on this one, fill me in too please  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Noble thoughts my Dark friend. I personally love the ryhme scheme to this one, you have done wonders with it. You may have well written this piece for me you know? Very incisive. michael |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I like the rhyme scheme too. Very well done. These are questions I can't answer. |
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