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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-29 08:53 PM


My ~Warrior~ With A Bow
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

My heart is all a'quiver,
with the inspiration you deliver.
Struck with a masterful blow
from the arrow in your bow.

You sent the arrow flying,
to my heart,
there's no denying.
Cupid would be proud
and that's a fact.
For the love you placed
within my heart
cannot be taken back.

The shot that you rendered
to my heart so tender,
caused this ~Maiden~ to surrender ...
to the ~Warrior~ in you.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 1999-11-29 08:55 PM


Marge, This is cute! Love it!
Check your e-mail
Elizabeth

Ohme
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2 posted 1999-11-29 10:27 PM


See, Ya done it again. I smiled
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 1999-11-29 10:35 PM


Elizabeth - Cute? I like cute!

OhMe - I see your 's

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4 posted 1999-11-29 10:56 PM


I like Warrior's! Very well done, Marge!


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Denise


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5 posted 1999-11-29 11:09 PM


very cute, Marge. That's what they mean by a lucky beau.
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 1999-11-29 11:14 PM


Denise - I agree. And ~Warrior's~ are meant to be tamed.

Balladeer - You always have a quip !
Love it.

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