Open Poetry #4 |
Field of Buttercups |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Field of Buttercups I'll never find another field Of buttercups of yellowness Where I can sit by barn of stone In shadows of its mellowness And read my book of poetry In solitude and pensive mood Each line is wine meant for the heart And for the soul a wanted food A place where field is all my own Not even sparrow interrupts No lovelier place I've ever known Than a field that's laced with buttercups Elizabeth Santos |
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Jewl_24_1999 Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 64USA |
love those buttercups, and i loved your poem, with all this snow its makes me think of a warm sunny day. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, My eyes still blur from your last poems visit I can just manage to type out this poem is exquisite. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Jewl Snow? Makes me wonder where you're from. Alaska? Most of us can only imagine buttercups this time of year Glad you liked the poem Elizabeth Sy Exquisite from an exquisite poet? YES! Elizabeth |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth, loved this poem so beautiful so serene ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dark Angel - and so are you Elizabeth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
How I love the buttercups. I sit and take my fill. Watching yet as they fill up, dancing outside my windowsill. Elizabeth - You surely made me see the buttercups splendor. B E A U T I F U L ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I bet that is a beautiful sight |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, thank you, dear and please do check your e-mail - again! Ohme, Thanks for the comment Elizabeth |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely buttercups! Lovely poem! ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I personally think that buttercups don't get the appreciation they deserve... Bravo! [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 11-29-1999).] |
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Jewl_24_1999 Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 64USA |
Elizabeth, i am from PA, and we are getting a bit of snow tonight, so your poem was so refreshing on a cold night like this. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nan, How do you do that??? Did you see "Cassandra's Tea Party"? You'll have to come up with dancing tea cups. Thanks for the buttercups Elizabeth |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Denise, Thanks, glad you liked it Jewel, Denise and I are also from Pa. She lives in Phila and i live in Pottstown. What about you? Elizabeth |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oh this is beautiful..the scene, the serenity..I was truly there Elizabeth..wonderful, wonderful work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "When you start falling, who's gonna catch ya? I'm willing to betcha, it will be me." ~Faith Hill: It will be me~ |
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