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Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

0 posted 1999-11-28 07:00 PM

Embrace

Rock me to sleep
with the rhythm of your heart,
run your fingers through my hair.
Bodies close,
sharing breath
in the final hours of today.
Limbs tangled
in a lover's knot.
Impossible to say
where you begin
and I end.

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

1 posted 1999-11-28 07:16 PM

Tara, this is lovely.

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Lorene

Yesterday is history,
tomorrow just a mystery.
And if today is good to me,
it will beat the heck out of day before yesterday!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-28 07:16 PM

A beautiful embrace! This is lovely, Tara!

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Denise

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-11-28 07:57 PM

'Tis a sweet embrace indeed you describe.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 1999-11-28 08:12 PM

Tara - Gosh, I like this. Can just see the intermingling of the limbs. Just lovely.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

5 posted 1999-11-28 08:15 PM

This is beautiful

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

6 posted 1999-11-28 08:48 PM

Yes...so beautiful...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 1999-11-28 10:19 PM

Tara...I absolutely love this. BRAVO!!!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 1999-11-29 12:51 PM

Just as beautiful as it can be, Tara. I like those images.

rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

9 posted 1999-11-29 01:07 AM

very beautiful, Tara..I can almost feel the closeness of the two lovers with your words...oh, to be that intimate...

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

10 posted 1999-11-29 05:28 AM

Wonderful! Simple and eloquent.

moonmoon
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

11 posted 1999-11-30 02:37 PM

Excellent imagery Tara..liked much..

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

12 posted 1999-11-30 03:02 PM

Thank you all for your comments! They are much appreciated.

brandondinsmore
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 142
OKC, OK

13 posted 1999-11-30 03:30 PM

UNBELIEVABLE!

I have been searching for those exact words myself!

I would enjoy very much hearing more from you.

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 1999-11-30 03:34 PM

Great job, Tara!!

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

15 posted 1999-12-01 09:30 PM

Thanks for your enthusiasm, Brandonsdinmore! If you do a search with my name, you'll find some other stuff I've written.

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