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jedimaster5 New Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 6Massena, NY USA |
Introduction to an environment I rarely exist in. The heavy smells clog my lungs and cloud my vision. The range of sounds are very unfamilar. People all around, Talking and cohearsing. I feel out of place with discomfort in my eyes. I want to be under a patch of stars, With winter nipping at my neck. And then I sense something. I shift my head to find this change. My eyes scope out the room. They stop. Focus begins. Everything else shuts down.] I see. I think... She sits with such poise. I watch as her own world entertains. No outside distraction affects her motionless soul. I gaze and wonder what would bring her eyes to mine. I draw a blank. I must turn away. A song plays on the radio. I stand and listen. My lips correspond to every word. I turn back to this girl who has captivated me. Her lips move as mine do. A smile forms widely on my face. And for this moment, that one moment, Hope thrives inside of me. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
oops sorry, one of those double comments on accident. [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 11-28-1999).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I liked this very much. Well? Did your eye's meet? did they, did they? hehe. Love your screen name too...cool...The force is with you! haha ------------------ <*\\\>< |
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jedimaster5 New Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 6Massena, NY USA |
they didn't and I guess they shouldn't of, I guess it just showed me that there are so many people in this world that we can be naturally drawn to, even when a word isn't spoken. ~Chadwyck |
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