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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Way down under it's said that when shove comes to push you ain't right in the head to see moose in the bush. But , down Byron Bay way there's a store bears my name though suffice it to say we're not one and the same. If you go walk-a-bout take this doctors' advoose and don't feed brussel sprouts to " Marsupial Moose" as extreme flatulence will most likely result making them quite incensed adding to the tumult. Angry Penguins agree, give these moose a wide berth they've caused people to flee from Canberra to Perth, Jindyworobaks state they no longer exist choosing to relegate them to legends and myths, but the bush people know it's the ones you can't hear that will lay you down low, worse than ol' Balladeers' [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (11-07-2008 12:13 PM).] |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Aside from the unforgivable sin of trying to rhyme result and tumult, this entry is fine and Dundee  Good research, good use of local lingo and landmarks and good invention of a new animal, the marisupial moose. Not bad, mate  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Balladeer, Cor, and blimey! Can't take credit for the new species though, apparently if you're researching "marsupial mouse" and you mispell it you get everything you needed to know about "marsupial moose" but were afraid to ask ( ain't technology great?!) Thanks, Doc |
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