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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2008-08-07 02:14 PM


Practicing medicine,
hopefully humorous,
bustin' on Balladeer
'til he goes clunk.

Kinda miss Nancy Ness,
weren't quite so serious
Balladelirious
gets in a funk

Were he impervious
would be fortuitous
planning on schooling us
who would've thunk

Derringly dubious
doing the obvious
"Doctordactylicus"
dutifully  flunks.

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (08-07-2008 08:16 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-08-07 06:28 PM


Doctordactylicus
Made such a silly fuss
Over our Balladeer
With all that bunk.

Guidelines he didn't read
Rules that were meant to heed
Dactyldisgracefully,
Doctor, you flunk!

and the fourth line containing one dactyl and a single sound.

ps...I do like the balladelerious, though

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2008-08-07 07:02 PM


Deer,
And if I didn't screw up who would you have to correct ? Thanks m'friend, a re-write is in the offing.
Doc

Done,
Doc

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (08-07-2008 08:29 PM).]

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3 posted 2008-08-15 03:12 AM


You are so clever.

A

Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2008-08-15 08:30 AM


Alison,
Thanks, but I wasn't the first time around.
Doc

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5 posted 2008-08-15 10:04 PM


It's not how one starts, Mooseman, it's the finish that counts. You finished well
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