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apes531 Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 35 |
Sitting up each night crying On the outside I show a smile, but inside I’m dying. Thinking of how to make this right, So I’m giving you a formal invite.. To my life, that is if you can relate, I’m gonna give it to you straight. Feeling wrong about everything Not knowing the troubles this would bring. Is what I’m saying necessary for everyone to know?.. I don’t care this is something I need to let go. Some days I don’t even want to get out of bed, This problems stuck in my head. Every situation it brings, Got me changing so many things. My troubles are much more then they use to be, You cant help and that’s a guarantee. What’s happened has happened, it’s now part of my everyday, No matter how much I want it to go away. It wont its always going to be here, I wish I could some how just disappear. |
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Hello, Ape. Thank you for joining us, albeit in an improper manner. The workshop is where different assignments are given and the poets submit entries based on them. If you would like to look through the past threads here you may find a lesson you would like to tackle. If you simply want feedback on your poem, please post it in the critical analysis forum, where it will be critiqued and commented on with suggestions and advice. Enjoy.... |
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