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Invented Poetry Types [homework assignment] |
Sunshine
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Invented Poetry Types quote: [source: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html ] Ok, let’s go: Spring Summer dallies gracefully, sending May her blessings and so, we acknowledge each blade, smell deep of bloom’s lavender, sigh as the breeze comes to us soothing winter worn egos, scents swinging on Robin’s song. © Karilea Rilling Jungel 1 May 2008 |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Does this mean our "colourclass" is already over? Sorry but I'm skipping this one, but I shall keep an eye on the workshop. I'm far too thrilled there's some action here again. |
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Sunshine
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Nah, Munda...the color class isn't finished...this is just for extra credit. |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Must be, munda Sunshine is just an exuberant soul who believes in multi-tasking. I turn the class over to her innovations. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sorrow Silent tears wreck havoc, mascara sketching a puzzling mask. Saline taste, tapping, as my tongue slips into capture mode. Surrealistic reality is an oxymoron, such is life sometimes. Sorrow shielded by falling tears. --- Mud Mindless play on a spring day, mired in ooey, ookey mud. Mooshing between barefoot toes while I make rivers to sail beetle boats upon. Munching on homemade cookies, hands muddy, dirty – crumbs gumming my fingers together as I stomp in mud. --- Alison [This message has been edited by Alison (05-01-2008 07:31 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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What...none of you ever had more than one teacher at a time? Not even in university? Sigh. I hand the baton back to Balladeer.... It's ok. I was just being... exuberant! |
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Sunshine
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Alison... my dear...dear friend... Seven lines...seven syllables. All lines need to align with the title first character alphabet letter. You did just fine with the alphabet... but I think the syllable count is a bit off. Unless I had one glass too many of merlot. You are hereby offered a makeup paper if our Professor 'Deer allows. Otherwise, you may withdraw from this class, as I was too exuberant with multitasking lessons. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum helped me -- oooooooooookay. (grins and goes to do something) |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Corrected Version: Sorrow Silent tears wet mascara, sketching a face mask, tragic. Saline taste tapping my tongue, slipping into capture mode. Surreal reality is such a trite oxymoron, still it seems appropriate. ---- Mud Mindless play on a spring day, mired in gooey warm mud. Mooshing between bare toes while making small leaf beetle boats. Munching on homemade cookies, mushy, grimy, cookie crumbs make my fingers sweet sticky! --- Alison |
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Sunshine
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Wahoo!!!!! You ROCK, Alison! Oh. Ahem. Decorum, decorum. What the hey...Grade A+ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
That was an interesting lesson too. I added my second post to the post above. Thank you both for taking the time to teach us. Here's to the both of youse! |
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Sunshine
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Ali...well done! You make mud fun. But then, I know all about your puddles, too! |
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Sunshine
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'Deer.... Don't forget. I share well! Bring on the next lesson! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, oh lovely one. These classes are fun! |
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