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Untitled [Angels, Angels]

Prairie Inkwells
Junior Member

since 2002-02-04

Posts 13
Kansas

0 posted 2005-11-06 06:52 PM

Angels, Angels, Angels galore
your story, please tell me more

Don't preach to me
ye, who fell by thirds
and consider us mere accidents,
at least, severe discipline begins
    with chaos as the lost chord.

Genesis started a wonderful rhythm
wit it said I will bless
    whom I will bless.

If I is I and me is me
where will true blessings be?

If it's a panther, don't answer,
but the Bible says if it is the
    Lion of Judah, take note.

Those living in Kansas may be mundane
my second birthright may be shyness
    but my origin is not profane,

I have found my true blessing.

Kansas is my home.

~*~

Max Hart
10/24/05
Written for Prairie Inkwells

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

1 posted 2005-11-13 09:14 PM

Max--

I enjoyed reading your poem in the workshop and was struck with your theme of what is important in life. We all need to sort through the chaos of life and find our true blessings. This is thought provoking.

Shenachie

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