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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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I love the feel of your touch It helps to soothe me very much As all my sins go down the drain I love the feel of your touch. Between the Spam and beans and such Intestines groan beneath the pain. I love the feel of your touch It helps to soothe me very much. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
You are the incorrigible one, Balladeer. *chuckle* |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
LOL! I am glad to see you, Deer, my friend. Hope you are doing well. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
hmm.. my goodness. very funny. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very funny 'Deer!!! Thanks for the laugh!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
ROTFLMAO ok....*drying my eyes* ok...*breathing deeply trying to control the laughing. So what am I supposed to learn from this anyway? Stay away from the beans? Be thankful for the relief of the cold when needed? ummmm....what form is this teacher? ohhhhh is this a sonnet? No wonder I have yet to get one right. (((((((((((hugs)))))))) and BIG smootches Marilyn. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Marilyn!!!! How great is this to see you again?!?!?!?! Glad you liked it...nope, not a sonnet - it's a triolet!  Gonna stick around a bit....please???? |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I plan to be here from time to time love. I wrote something to you in open. See if you can find it. I know it has been a couple of days since I posted it but I hope we can have some fun with it. Marilyn. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I know it it a triolet but what excatly is a triolet? |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
A very heartfelt tribute to a dear and devoted friend, Balladeer. I'm sure he knows how you feel. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
All I can say is it's a good thing toilets can't see or smell! Well I guess they do smell. |
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