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Nan
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0 posted 1999-12-21 11:40 AM


Here are my awesome kids from 5/6th period....

Are they fantastic, or what????

© Copyright 1999 Nancy Ness - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-12-21 11:53 AM


              Christmas Tree

     As I sit here looking at the tree,
     An awsome Idea comes to me.
     This tree is bare,
     Thats very rare!
     I want to make it look nice,
     I didn't have to think twice.
     It needed pretty colorful lights,
     As pretty as my new tights.
     I put them on it didn't take me long,
     But there was still something wrong.
     Where are all the present?

By, Merri Adams Age 13 7th grade
    

[This message has been edited by Class (edited 12-21-1999).]

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2 posted 1999-12-21 11:54 AM


Christmas  By Brittany

Its Christmas eve
I just stepped outside
To gaze at the sky
To think about what Christmas means

Santa,elves,snowman and rudolf
It must mean more than that
Tonight is the night that Christe was born
The Christe that gave us life

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4 posted 1999-12-21 11:57 AM


The sky is blue
very blue bluer
than blue the
lightest blue
you have
ever seen in
your life
the color is BLUE      
        
                       BY,
                       J.R.D.
                    



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6 posted 1999-12-21 11:59 AM


             My Present

Is my present big,
Is my present small
I do not know at all
It might be tiny might be small
I may not want it at all
What if my present is so fun
I may want it to be the only one
I wonder what my present will be,
Trading cards,or maybe a t.v.
What it is I do not care all that matters
Is that the present isn't there
The one present that really matters is
The present within you
So treasure that pesent because
The present is you.

By M.A.


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7 posted 1999-12-21 12:01 PM


IN VEGAS

Here I am in vegas
the dealer laid down the rules
now here I am in Vegas, silent,
looking at my cards and the other players
waiting for then to say
go fish

                          - Master Brown

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8 posted 1999-12-21 12:02 PM


               When I moved

    When I first moved into my house I thought I was going to beltch it was so nice I grabed a dice and took a flight in a brand new kite it flew so strat I thought I ate a choclate cake then I faked that I was late so I won a cake

By CHRIS DUARTE  

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9 posted 1999-12-21 12:02 PM


Trees For You and Me.

I see trees dance in the wind
I see trees grow really tall
I see trees everywhere
Whether thier big or small.
Trees protect deserts from storms
They give us lots of shade
They give us their trunks;
So we can build buildings and homes.
We give them some care
In hope that they live long;
'cause we need them for
Our future children to go on!

By: Rebecca Calverley.



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10 posted 1999-12-21 12:03 PM


          MR.ELF
    
       hi i'm santa's elf
       and do i have news
       for you
       santa checked his list
       with confusion
       found out you've been
       snoozin' well your on the  
       the job!
       since coal got so expensive here's
       the scoop
       he filling your stocking
       with SNOW MAN POOP!
  
    by
ashley of falmouth MA

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11 posted 1999-12-21 12:04 PM


My Stinking Umbrella    By Brittany

Rain comes down on my umbrella
My old umbrella from the cellar

Bright blue ruffles that are falling off and should be mend
Red,pink,yellow stripes covering it from end to end

But at least it does its job to keep the rain off my head

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12 posted 1999-12-21 12:05 PM


Why Do You Hate Me?
    By: Erin

Why do you hate me?
I really want to know
I don't think I did anything
But how would I know
I want to be your friend again
All i do is cry
I cry because I love you
I love you as a friend
I really don"t want to loose you
You were just my best friend
What did I do wronge
Was it something I said
Or was it something I said
I really like
You still are my friend
Please forgive me for whatever I did
I really sorry please be my friend again!

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13 posted 1999-12-21 12:05 PM


                  ONE DAY

One day I got out of bed
the phone rang and it was Ed
As I was talking to him
my mother called from the gym

I got on the bus
and sat next to Gus
we were on our way to school
to see people who are cool

                         -DAVID ZZZZZ.

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14 posted 1999-12-21 12:06 PM


                My Dream    
                    
My dream is to become a hockey star
I really hope it's not that far

I love to skate and shoot the puck
I want the goalie to just duck

I love to feel the wind in my face
I really don't think you'd want to race

Then one game it came to me
Losing that just couldn't be

Then when it was four to four
I shot the puck I had to score

The puck went through the five hole
All the sudden I had a goal!

                             Jared

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15 posted 1999-12-21 12:07 PM


             Friends

  There was a girl named Gerry,
  Who was best budz with Perry.
  Than there friend Chris came along
  While singing this song
  Now they are all happy and MERRY!


                   By: Erika

     PS-This is decicated to my friend Chris, Gerry and Perry!

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17 posted 1999-12-21 12:08 PM


             Santa
Oh Santa, Oh Santa,you come so far,
Do you come from some old town bar,
You bring us gifts and make us happy,
I think I'll you my good old pappy,

I hope you don't get queezy,
You will look cheesy,
I hope you get a lift,
Thanks for the gift

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19 posted 1999-12-21 12:09 PM


HUIKU   BY BRITTANY

The ocean rumbles
It is endless miles of sea
So mysterious

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20 posted 1999-12-21 12:09 PM


Here's the best epithet,
Its as powerful as Boba Fett!
You pinky winky bingy googly wong,                
You have as much brains as a ping pong!
Your as annoying as Tiny Winky,
And your also as big as the whale the minke!
You darn diggity dog,
Your dumb enough to play with pogs!
Kinky winky doodly binky,
Your as floppy as a slinky!
Your brain is so small and iggy,
Your the missing link to the dinosaur biggy!
Oogly woogly dinky gong,
Your so dull, you play with a bomb!
Your so weird you wear a cape,
And your as goofy as an ape!
All the time your waging verbal wars,
You also smear on your face tons of smores!
Your so sloppy,
You always need a moppy!
You stopped wearing diapers at five,
Your so dumb you stuck your head in a bee hive!
Hoogly boogly hamper wamper,
Your favorite underwear is pampers!
Boobly woogly biggly woo,
You still like to watch to watch Bumpety Boo!
Wingy pingy slingy marny,
Your favorite character is Barny!
Ingy wingy blingy shaw,
You still like to walk around with your ma!
I like Mad Libs,
When you always shout you want first dibbs!
Lingy wingy plingy barnage,
You always cause some carnage!
Oingyboinly barrage, your so weird,
you like to play in the garage!

                     Little Surfer dude Josh



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21 posted 1999-12-21 12:10 PM


                  The Picture
  
         She looked into the picture,
         and saw what she could see
    She saw a wiggle,a squiggle,and even a                                
               straight line
          What she could not see,
   was how much her life bends,twirls,and      
                  jiggles
    just like the picture in her hands
     A twist,a turn,a sycopathic burn    
Her hands begin to chatter just like the                  
                noise band
yet in the picture her life is in her hands..

                 -Bubbles


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22 posted 1999-12-21 12:10 PM



           Christmas Once A Year

Christmas comes but once a year
I go outside to hear the carolers
Or just go have fun in the snowy weather
Christmas comes but once a year
I hear the sounds of slay bells,jing,jing,jing
Christmas comes but once a year
But a year is worth the wait.

By M.A.


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23 posted 1999-12-21 12:12 PM


            My new puppy

    For now,
        you're just a little thing
        but soon,
        we'll see what the future will bring
    
    For now,
        happy you wiggle from head to toe
        but soon,
        no one knows how big you'll grow
  
    For now,
        you cover my face with licks
        but soon,
        you will beable to do more tricks

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24 posted 2000-01-07 06:26 PM


How do they do it Nan ? They are all very good !
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