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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
sounds a lot like Bergeson's poem, and sounded just as confusing. Still you have a lot of talent if u can make up sumthin like dat. Continue to confuse me!! lollz |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Clever is the right word for this one. I don't think I can make 501 but might try 301. See my post to Nan on Acrostics. Cheers. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DOC !!! You didn't say that ..... quote:Ohmygosh ! I'm laughing my patootie off !!!!!!!  LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLOL No *huglets* until the room freshner is used !  LOL~ TEACHER !!!! Call the sanitation unit ! Doc, you are a real stinker ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Kayjay: There's a 301 now? What's dat? Arggh! All these numbers. Y cant we name them sumthin else cuzz any number past 2 digits is too much 4 me (unless it's the amount of b-day $$$ I get, then u can go add them digits all u want!) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
IcyFlamez88, Thanks. The question is , does the whole poem have be able to be read identically from from to back, or (as I did) can it simply be constructed of palidromic sentences? Judges? Ken, These are a lot of work. I tried to come up with as many palindromic words as I could figure out without resorting to a dictionary,used that for the vocabulary of the poem, and then tried to put them in some sort of order according to the theme of the acrostics.After much head-banging, pencil chewing, aspirin swallowing,and about a week of re-writes this was the result that begs the question,"Was it worth it?". To hear Marge chuckling, I'd have to say, "yes". Going to go check out your reply to Nan. Doc Marge, Many apologies, guilty as charged.I claim "Pure Insanity" as my defense. Thank you. Doc IcyFlamez88, As I said when i signed up this month, I think Nan just makes this stuff up. Doc |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
LOL...Nan just doesn't "make this stuff up" but look at you take her up on all of the challenges! You're a marvelous Doc... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFLMAO at the same line Marge selected. Great write! This 501 stuff is sooooo difficult to do! Makes me want to buy some really tight old Levis for inspiration! |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
lollz, I think so too, I thunk we're all going to end up like James Joyce, making up our own palindrome words. (note 2 all who dunt noe wut I mean, Joyce wrote the longest English palindrome word, TATTARRATTAT. It doesn't mean anything. He just made it up and put it in his novel, Ulysses). I mean, it's much ezier than looking up stuff on webster'. Here's my first: karattasasattarak. Like joyce's it dunt mean a thing, but I'll have to call the Oxford English Dictionary and say, my word is longer than his, lollz BTW itz IcyFlamez89. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
 enjoyed this clever piece of work... regards, sudhir |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Lady In White, Are you sure about that, I mean, what kind of a twisted mind would actually come up with a formatted double acrostic palindrome?Oops, forget I asked that. Doc Midnitesun, Yup. I always try to be attentive in class (but, being a little retentive doesn't hurt either!) Doc IcyFlamez89, So sorry for mixed up numbers ( way too many to keep track of, or eye-sight getting poor) I like your way of thinking, think i'll just start making words up too. Doc Sudhir, I'm not too sure about "clever", I was thinking more like "excruciatingly painful", but, I'm glad you liked. Doc |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW (that's acrostic 501 too you know  )Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Titia, Yeah, things got a little topsy-turvy and I kinda forgot what direction I was headed in. Thanks, hope all is well with you. Doc |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
  ...YIKESEKIY...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Okay, Doc~ I was searching for something to show you. Finally located it - /pip/Forum72/HTML/003366.html and it didn't even hurt ! Oh sure, Teacher doesn't have a section for this !  Well .... back to the playground ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Dear Marge, That was quite a treat ( ever thoughtful, you).Thank you much. Doc |
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