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To Love Again - Monorhyme Acrostic
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To Love Again - Monorhyme Acrostic |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*To Love Again*~ The past returns, to rid today Of loneliness in love's dismay Look deep within, for what to say One moment lost, too much to pay Verse etched on heart will sure convey Emotions ne'er have gone astray At last, a love need not delay God listened to a heart in pray And through the rain, was shone a ray Inspiring hope that love will stay Now and forever, come what may ~vlraynes Okay...so, you didn't ask for the Monorhyme part, but that's what my muse wanted to do, and who am I to argue..LOL.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful, Vicky. I enjoy reading what your muse has you write. |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Wow, just amazing. Do you think I could borrow your muse for a little while? Mine seems to be on sick leave... [Groans in disgust as my muse belches after munching bag of Doritos] [This message has been edited by IcyFlamez89 (04-13-2003 08:26 PM).] |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Great acrostic. I was fascinated by your monorhyme. Since my muse is out to lunch it was great to see the inspiration of yours. Shenachie |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Beautifully penned... can we have more? Regards, Sudhir |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mono-rhyme? You'd think this girl has a one-track (or is that just "focused") mind... You surely can write when you're motivated, m'friend...  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
A mono-rhyme it surely is P leasantry I didn't miss P oems by you are such a bliss L ucky for me I noticed this A llways good for a big kiss U ndoubtedly you're my soul-sis S orry if my voice may hiss E nd of story, can't think of an 'iss'  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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