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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Disguised Inspect me. I shall reveal my secrets grudgingly,as if from hiding, until they're completely revealed to you. In candid duplicity I screen from you my likeness exposed. To be Disguised |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Now, Doc~ Close ... but no ricta~ Let's see ... Disguised (2) Inspect me. I (4) shall reveal my secrets (6) grudgingly, from hiding, (6) until they are completely revealed to you. (11) In candid duplicity I (8) screen from you my likeness (6) exposed. To be (4) Disguised (2) Should be 2 4 6 8 10 8 6 4 2  You simply need to dust the erasers and meet me on the playground by the merry-go-round !*Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (03-20-2003 05:34 PM).] |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marge, You are a dear! Thanks for pointing this out. Correction already made, somehow I just lost count. My turn to push. You go for a ride. Doc |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Ah this is so coy and beguiling. You perfected the count and I still am curious about the secrets. Keeps me hanging on. Poet, reveal thyself! Shenachie |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Disguised Check out the Moose A bard in masquerade Can't hide his knack for poetry No matter what sort of suit he's wearing For he's still a master of rhyme We should hear more from him And his fine verse Disguised |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marge, Thanks for the smiley. Bridget, To reveal what is disguised, one need only look closely. Nan, Surely you are not going to let one of your class put something over on you. That would just not be "right" (or "left" for that matter). Doc |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Not if I can help it, Doc...  .. Write... |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Nan, That's why you're the teach! Last month I snuck a couple double acrostic rictameters in, but no one seemed to pick up on them. I'd still like to know who suggested this format for this month.I guess I'm just a curious moose. Doc |
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