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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Ashes Embered ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~So cold Ashes embered Wind shan’t blow them to life Sooted stir of memoried flame Cannot breathe life into them once again Dead the recall of love so warm Long before chilling storm Took you away So cold~ Deeply within Iced-heart of never mend All alone in the dark of night Fingertip tracings cannot find the light Embered flame extinguished into Ashen thoughts still of you Exhaled recall So cold~ Queen of deny No more quilting of love For you are gone so far my dove Away from these arms that longingly ache How many times must a heart break Before the lesson’s learned Love dies … slow burn So cold~ Fireplaced recall Offers no comforting Embrace of this body in need Aloneness consumes each moment of time The only arms I feel are mine Reaching out to touch you So far away So cold~ Now I lay down This claim to past desire Full realize … there is no fire To warm me on this cold, cold night Never has this love, so wrong, been so right Tears-in-fall drown all of the sheep Jumping fences of weep I’m left to cry So cold~ Ricta-Cinco-Meter For my friend, Vicky~ A little project from the Poetry Workshop Forum also posted in Open #Whatever ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Bring Marge in from the playground, and lookie what we get... I KNEW she could settle down and work hard if we'd just be patient with her... This is awesome, Marge... I'm very happy to see you...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Patience is a good thing...I didn't even see her track any sand in from the playground. I think she goes to the top of the class, Teach! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thankee, Teach and Shiner~ I'm on my way to the merry-go-round, It's Doc's turn to push !!  *Hmmmmmm, perhaps I need a 'dizzy blonde' icon ? LOL~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wow Marge! This is so impressive. How can you write the old "love gone wrong" theme without being trite and cliched? And you did handstands with rictameter. So glad you came in from the merry-go-round to do handstands in the classroom. My eyes are bugging with awe and admiration. Shenachie |
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