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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-03-05 08:54 AM






Liquid,
Lapping brooks, streams,
Burbling, gurgling, splashing
Bringing wet cool to sunny days
I will splash you if you will splash me more
Then we might lie upon the shore
Smiling, beguiling ways,
Drowning in our
Liquid

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1 posted 2003-03-05 12:42 PM


Karilea~
Well .... just drop a ray of sunshine right slap-dab in the middle of the classroom, will ya' ?
Koolers !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Nan
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2 posted 2003-03-17 12:48 PM


Liquid
Everywhere
Melting snow's all around
Ponds and lakes no longer frozen
Finally looking like spring might just come
Sunshine's rays are stronger
Solid landscapes
Liquid

Justbleu
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3 posted 2003-03-19 02:45 AM


This is really cool....

I'm having trouble with mine....I might just start over!!!!

Bridgette

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4 posted 2003-03-24 11:18 PM


This is another great example of your liquid way with words--so smooth!

Shenachie

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