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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*Rock This Heart*~ Awake This sleeping heart With gentle kiss of cheek Tenderly whisper...'Come with me' Then guide this wayward soul into the light Weave fingers 'round this calloused hand And kiss these chilled lips warm Love...rock this heart Awake ~vlraynes All righty, Nan...there ya go.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Woo, nice! Now I get it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GirlFriend~ This is just AWESOME~ Your turn to push the merry-go-round !  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahh my two favorite girls! and you wrote a beauty Vicky Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
viraynes, Well written and concise, yet, expansive in it's portrayal.(You said alot with a little). Doc |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Awake From long slumber Beneath snug coverlet Just sanctity for broken hearts For with mere glimpse of amorous arouse We pay repose no further heed Bestir sweet lustful beck Love's revival Awake |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Vicky, Nicely done. I like it a lot. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aw shucks, now I want to go all mushy too... this is beautiful! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
To heck with Nan....there I go!!!  |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Awake To Awareness Of a Rictameter Well written, expressing a lot With few words,uniquely saying it best. Demonstrating how it is done. All I lack is talent To bring my words Awake. Thanks, Vicky, for a splendid example of rictameter. Also enjoyed your exhortation to love. Shenachie |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Now if only I could write and be so talented.....VERY NICE!!!!! Bridgette |
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