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Spring Comes [Cinquains]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-02-06 05:33 PM

Spring Comes

white plum
trees swaying wild
foxtrot, samba, rumba
white dress, no music, just the wind
dance me

~*~

red bud
holding tightly
flowers colored purple
how did purple become such red
beauty

~*~

peach trees
soft fragrant pink
blossoms unfolding now
soon sweet fruit bearing down to pick
pick me

~*~

unfold
not just flowers
blossoming all around
come forth, smell spring’s fragrance, just...here
spring comes

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2003-02-06 09:25 PM

This is
lovely, lovely
Now I can barely wait
for winter's cold to go away
come spring...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-02-07 01:33 AM

You go, girl! Very, very nice. I enjoyed every line.

Most people left-justify 'em, but I like the centered effect here, especially with this subject matter. After all, flowers ARE symetrical.....

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Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

3 posted 2003-02-07 08:36 PM

Sunshine,
Had to dig through about 8 feet of snow just to get to the computer, but yes, this is nice,I can almost hear birds chirping. Thank you.
Doc

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2003-02-07 11:28 PM

Karilea, you do this as well as you do everything else. I am definitely ready for the spring.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-02-09 02:54 AM

Karilea, I love this. Maureen told me that this was back here. Now, I've got to try to learn this.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-02-27 08:28 AM

Springtime

New Birth
Crocus peeking
Midst budding daffodils
Hibernal vestiges begone
Rejoice

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