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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-02-06 05:33 PM


Spring Comes

white plum
trees swaying wild
foxtrot, samba, rumba
white dress, no music, just the wind
dance me


~*~


red bud
holding tightly
flowers colored purple
how did purple become such red
beauty


~*~


peach trees
soft fragrant pink
blossoms unfolding now
soon sweet fruit bearing down to pick
pick me


~*~


unfold
not just flowers
blossoming all around
come forth, smell spring’s fragrance, just...here
spring comes

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-02-06 09:25 PM


This is
lovely, lovely
Now I can barely wait
for winter's cold to go away
come spring...

  

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2 posted 2003-02-07 01:33 AM


You go, girl! Very, very nice. I enjoyed every line.

Most people left-justify 'em, but I like the centered effect here, especially with this subject matter. After all, flowers ARE symetrical.....

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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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3 posted 2003-02-07 08:36 PM


Sunshine,
Had to dig through about 8 feet of snow just to get to the computer, but yes, this is nice,I can almost hear birds chirping. Thank you.
Doc

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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4 posted 2003-02-07 11:28 PM


Karilea, you do this as well as you do everything else. I am definitely ready for the spring.
garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-02-09 02:54 AM


Karilea, I love this. Maureen told me that this was back here. Now, I've got to try to learn this.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Nan
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6 posted 2003-02-27 08:28 AM


Springtime

New Birth
Crocus peeking
Midst budding daffodils
Hibernal vestiges begone
Rejoice

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